Literature Circle - #3
In our third literature circle we talked about what might happen to Julie if Daniel finds her sneaking out of the house. We thought he would probably get really mad because he doesn’t want Julie to leave him as he really likes her. What discussed what problems we thought she might run into? If Daniel wakes up and sees she’s not there then he might go after her and then when he catches her he will probably take her back to Pearl’s house. We thought she may also have travelling problems as she may not be able to get a ride. People will see that she is only thirteen and completely by herself and so they may not want to pick her up because she’s not with an adult. She might not have any money with her either. We also discussed how Daniel treated her and how she will react to Daniel. Maybe she will give in or maybe she will fight for herself and be free. She could even possibly hurt Daniel badly when trying to defend herself.
It's good although you didn't explain as much information as before. With more information makes a better blog post. The post seems a bit rushed as well as in the sentence, "What dicussed what problems we thought she might run into?" It's hard to understand, its a bit confusing. In addition, the sentence, "If Daniel wakes up and sees she's not there then he might go after hre and then when he catches her he will probebly take her back to Pearl's house", the sentence is a bit wordy, I think it would help to put commas or periods. I think there are a lot of good points in this post, but there is still much needing to be added.
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